A Review

After a class discussion and presentation of our blogs, here are my thoughts on my classmates' blogs:


Blog Post One:


Sam:


- Why print music haven’t embrased downloading online.


Very observational and informative for some posts. Not as much of an opinion on some of the blog posts. Very interesting process of assessing the material and the concluding wither her opinion.


Presented simply but effectively. Easy to understand and work around. Seems to be comprehendable and grammatically correct. Referencing done well but not in APA style.

Link: http://samdocherty.posterous.com/


Blog Post Two:


Brandon:


-Aurthenticity in Music and Autotune.


The information is extensive and includes a lot about the original article’s ideas. He describes the idea well and then has a second section for his analysis of the text.


Preseted nicely on the page but really needs to apply the use of titled section. Looking at the text it is hard to keep it in focus for there is so much. I think if it was broken down into section it would be better.


Good in-text referencing but the article itself needs to be referenced at the end of the text. A link to the page isn’t really enough. What if its an offline article?

Link http://legallez.wordpress.com/ 


Blog Post Three:


-Australian Compositional Voice. Is there one?

Very limited amount of sources but this should build soon. The information was fairly basic and broad. The sources didn’t relate much to his topic, he said, but the information could lead to new questions.


Presentation was basic and plain and really needed some attention like titles and page placement. Referencing was serverely lacking but grammatically sound.


Blog Post Four:


-MIDI on the world:


The analysis of the information was quite good. The information was all there but I would have liked to have seen more on how this related to his topic. I think the ideas are there but it needs refining.


Presentation is outstanding and Referencing is all correct. Very impressive webpage and very clear and consise.

Link: http://s2749655.wordpress.com/10-review-viii/ 

Well done to everyone!